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Dib walked straight to his room when he got home, to cover up all the cameras, hand cuffs and Alien hurting devices he had stored there. He didn't want to scare Zim away. Why? He still didn't know, he just figured Zim would leave if he saw the lasers, choking devices, many hand cuffs, plans to stop Zim's plans and spying equipment.
When he was done throwing the junk in his closet, under his bad, in his drawers and anywhere else the stuff could fit, he went down stairs to make him and Gaz afternoon snacks; he didn't want Zim to see him eat, considering Zim doesn't eat.

Zim entered his base, only to be crashed down by a flying Gir.
"MASTER!!! I MISSSSED YOU!!! Did you miss MEEE?!?!"
"Get off Gir!" Zim pushed the robot off. Gir just bounced off happily to the kitchen.
Zim walked over to the couched and sat, down. "Gir! Did My Tallest call while I was at skool today?"
"YES! Wait a minute…. NO!" the robot bounded in with a block of cheese and sat down by Zim. He pulled a cheese grader out of his head and started grading the cheese into his open mouth.
Zim shivered in disgust. "How can you eat that SLOP?" Zim spat. Gir was about to reply when Zim cut in. "Never mind. So did My Tallest call or not?"
"I don't know!" He jumped off the couch and started running in circles around the couch yelling "Cheesey, cheese, cheese!"
Zim ignored him for the moment and turned on the TV. The moment the Scary Monkey Show appeared Gir stopped suddenly and threw the cheese and Zim, sat down and said "I love this show!"
Zim dodged the cheese knowing he had control of Gir for the moment. "Ok Gir. If you want to watch TV then you are going to have to tell me if My Tallest called or not." Gir said nothing for the moment, so Zim clicked the off button.
"NOOOO!!!" Gir wailed and started running in a small circle in front of the TV, crying. Then he stopped and said. "Yep! They did! They said they had the Time Of Leaving and for you to call them back as soon as possible. Then they said they don't know when you will return, but this is the most important mission ever and you are the only one who can do it, SIR!" He saluted. He had gone into Duty mode some point in the speech.
"OK. Good Gir." He tossed the remote to Gir. Gir caught it mid-air and snapped back to the former idiot he is, and brainlessly watched his show.
Zim went to his toilet elevator and flushed himself down to a room filled with wires, and a large screen with a Irken keyboard. He dialed the Tallest number. After about a minute of waiting, Red and Purple appeared on the screen. They looked serious and aged. The whole mess has stressed them out, but not as much as it has Zim. He just didn't look as bad.
"Ah. Zim. Thank you for contacting us," Red said in a very serious voice.
Zim gave a bow, his antennae wiggling in salute. "It's a pleasure. Now I understand the Time Of Leaving is almost upon me," Zim makes the effort to speak better; for the mission.
"Yes. By what you have told us, the human skool you attend has a break; Summer vacation, is it not? And it is a time where skool children of your age leave the skool to frolic and what-not. This is true, yes?" Purple said in sophisticated, serious voice. He is trying really hard for the mission.
"Yes. I am not sure how long it lasts, but I do not think it matters. Once I leave my Invader Job is on hold."
Red, nor Purple, even dared to think of laughing at the dumbness of Zim. He still thinks his Invader Job is real. But it doesn't matter anymore. The only thing that matters is the mission to save them; to save the girls; the only ones who matter at the moment. They are more important than even the Tallest.
"OK. Zim, you do understand you are the only one who can do this mission, yes?" Red asked.
"Yes."
"And if you fail, you know your fate?"
"Yes. Death."
"OK. Goodbye Zim," Purple signs off.
"Goodbye my Tallest," He says to the blank screen, near tears.
A moment later he sits down on the floor and brings his knees to his chest. He snuggles his face in his knees and begins to sob. He violently shivers, sobbing aloud and letting the hot tears flow.
"Oh my Tallest! I hope they are OK!" He sobs.
He cries for a little longer. Then, when he thinks he won't cry much longer, he gets up off the floor, brushes the tears from his face and fixes his uniform. He goes up stairs and begins to ready for his visit to The Dib's house.
OK! I Finally gave up trying to put my pic as the preview and used the same pic as the first Chapter. If you wanna see my pic I drew feel free to check it out! ;) Please comment and tell me what you guys think! It is really important that anyone who read this fanfic does comment, because, if you don't I will think I am a horrible writer and drawer and never write anything ever again!
And if you do coment on my stuff then I will write faster and make more small fanfics. Also I am going to write epic fanfics of Invader Zim IF I get good reviews and comments. So if you seriously think this is good then you have seen nothing and you should tell me if it is good because it will help!
Thank you and please enjoy my fan fic.

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:iconnedrian:
Nedrian Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
girls?
is it the tallest daughters or something?
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Read and find out (;
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DarbyLucy Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like your fics so far! :D The only thing I'm confused about is this important mission the Tallest are sending Zim on. Are the "girls" female Irkens? And why is it so important to save them?
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That is part of the mysterious story-line my friend (; something that must be unconvered later
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DarbyLucy Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, okay. Clever :plotting:
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Hurr hurr....
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DarbyLucy Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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:iconxxmelxisxbrokenxx666:
What's up with the female Irkens?
That's the only part I'm confused about.
Otherwise I LOVE IT!
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Female Irkens in general or the specific ones Zim is worried about in my story?
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Uhh, the specific ones.
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well those Irken Girls are really special and Zim knows it and they are special to him so he's gunna go on a little mission to help them :3
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:iconxxmelxisxbrokenxx666:
Oh... That sounds interesting.
:meow:
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconxxmelxisxbrokenxx666:
lol! =D
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GrimBuneary Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011   Writer
It makes my cry when I see Zim cry..
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awz me too
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GrimBuneary Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011   Writer
So sad.. ;(
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Greenspoonloverszim Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
I'm kinda confused on what the tallest want from zim :P but it's such a great story!!!! Continue writing!!!!!!!!:D
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
You mite not be confused if you keep reading or re read what u've already read
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Greenspoonloverszim Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
Okay! :D
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Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHAAT ZIM'S GON LEAVE EVERYBODY TO HALP TEH TALLESTS?


Man how is he STILL that dumb?
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Not entirely just the tallest, the girls are WAAAAAAAAAAY important. He would murder the tallest for them... IF he could
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Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ZIM HAS TEH POWAR I KNO HE CANS
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URU123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
Awesomness! Haha....I feel the same thing when someone reads and does not comment...that sucks for me! Well its good...I tried commenting on the first one but it would not work..so i comment here for both ok?!Its going very good so far..but i dont get why Zim was crying at the end...hopefully i will find out soon..... on to the next chapter!
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! He is crying for the girls! :P
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URU123 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010
Hahaha
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol.
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InvaderLabRat Featured By Owner May 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol 'CHEESE' XD
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HeCallsMeHisChild Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, honest opinion is... I am confused by what the Tallests want, but perhaps that will become clearer as the story progresses. Even the beginnings of the friendship between Dib and Zim seem rushed. The writing is a little rough and not very descriptive.

I'm sorry... I don't like leaving reviews like this.
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner May 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok! The whole mission and the Tallest thing will not become completely clear until Zim spills it all to Dib, but Dib will get wild fantasies about what is going on as the story continues. Everything ties up at the end.
As for the rushing friendship, well... the whole point of me starting it so fast is because Zim has been there already for, like, a year. and Dib is subcounciously understanding Zim a little better. The dreams did much for him. And he feels sympathy for Zim. He only invited him to his house because it felt right to him. It was the nice thing to do, since he could tell Zim was feeling down for some reason.
The main reason I rushed into the begining of the friendship is because they had already been fighting a year, so I felt no need to wast the precious, usable time on fighting instead of friendship and betrayle.
Before Summer they stab eachother in the back because of their wild imaginations.
Then Zim leaves on his mission after Dib did something terrible to him(I wont say what!) and blames himself when Zim's house is gone.
Then the ending might either be Zim dieng by failing the mission and Dib finds out and goes into a murderous rage after being told by Zim's Tallest what happened, and a second book is made of revenge OR Zim makes it and comes back and tells dib what happened, Dib reacts(good or bad) and it ends to have a second book come and something happens between them.

This is just the ending ideas I have in mind for the book. So no one should know what the mission is until the end of the book anyway.
The reason it isn't very descriptive at the moment is because I'm not trying my best. This is just a mini fanfic and it will, no doubt, get more descriptive in due time. The next chapter, that I've already started, is very much more decriptive than the last two, because I have more to put in. I myself cleared the pathway for the book and I can focus more on describing things now.
I hope this clears somethings up, and maybe gives you a better idea of what is going on and why. And maybe, if you wanted to, you could check out the next chapter when it comes out this weekend or sometime next week.
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