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Everything is on fire. The skool, the buildings, my house…. The world….
I'm standing in the street watching the chaos. A half-dead man crawls towards me. He looks up and reaches to me. "Help me!" he pleads. I would, but he is already dead at my feet. I back away.
I tried, I really did. But I guess it wasn't enough. This is all Zim's fault! He did this! I tried to stop him, I always have, but the world thought I was crazy! They called me insane! Now they believe me and the world is ruled by Zim and the Irken race.
I fall to my knees and cry out in pain. The blood seeps down my back, from the wound Zim created.
"You should have left, Dib. Now you are dead!" Zim cackles. "Mwah hahahahahahahahahaha!"

Dib wakes up scared and sweat staining the bed. He searches in the dark to find his glasses. When he does he checks the time. 6 o'clock. He should be getting up now anyways, so he goes downstairs to get some cereal.
He shuffles down the stairs and goes into the kitchen. Gaz is already there playing her Game Slave 2. Dib checks the cabinet and finds some CocoFang cereal. He gets his breakfast ready, sits down and starts to eat.
"Do you HAVE to eat near me?" Gaz asks not looking up from her GS2.
"Duh. Where else would I eat?" says Dib.
"I don't know and it's not my problem. I am going to skool now," she nonchalantly walks out of the kitchen and out of the door.
Dib looks at the clock. "Oh no! I'm going to be late if I don't hurry!" he says to no one and rushes out the door.
He catches the bus just on time going to the back of the bus to sit with Gaz. Usually on the way to skool he yaps about Zim and what he is going to do to stop him, but today he keeps quite and thinks about his dream. He has never had a dream like that before. Usually he dreams of catching Zim and watching his autopsy video, but Zim has never won, no not in Dibs dreams.
Gaz wasn't sure what to think about her brother and deep down she cared. But being Gaz she acts like she doesn't, so she asks "What's your problem?!"
"Nothing, just a weird dream I had last night," Dib simply answers.
Gaz knew where this was going and she didn't want a full explanation, so she left it at weird dream.
After dib got to skool he was still quite. He walked to class quietly and sat in his seat right before the bell rang. He only noticed he was in class when he looked over to see Zim wasn't there.
"Hmmm…. Where is the alien?" he asked no one.
"Zim? I heard he dropped out," a random boy said.
"No. I heard he was eaten by that evil green dog of his," said a girl.
"No he wasn't! He was hit by a bus! I saw it this morning! He was walking to skool and a bus hit him!" another girl piped in. Her remark had Ohhs and Ahhs around the room.
Dib for some reason got a little worried. He didn't understand why, but he was worried about the little alien. Would if he really was hit by a bus? The kids always made a big deal when a kid is tardy or absent, but Dib could sense something was wrong, but he didn't know what.
The class kept chatting and debating over Zim's absence, when Ms. Bitters slinked in like a shadow and hissed "Be quite! Or I will call all of your parent and instruct them to do terrible things to you and to love you less!"
All the kids shut up and the class began. About forty-five minutes into reading how to skin a moose, the door opened and Zim walked in.
He looked different and Dib could tell. He looked less enthusiastic and more sad than usual. He didn't come in and announce he is here and why he was late, followed by an "I am normal!" He just walked in and went to his desk.
"Zim! Why are you so late!?" Ms. Bitters demanded.
Zim thought a moment for a good excuse and just whispered something incoherently.
"What!? Speak up Zim so we may all hear of why you are late," Ms. Bitters demanded, once again.
"I…. I…. I was…." He scratches the back of his head, "I don't have an excuse. I am sorry."
That freaked Dib out the most. Mostly the apology, but also because he was speaking right, usually he would say "Zim does not have to answer to YOU!" or "Zim is sorry," but he wasn't the same.
Ms. Bitters seemed to have noticed this to, but quickly had a comeback. "Well that doesn't cut it Zim. Give me a reason why you are late or go to the office!"
"But… But Zim… I mean 'I' don't have a valid human excuse! I can't tell you why! Zim shouldn't have to answer to a stuupid huuman meat puppet like you anyways!" He ranted back.
Ms. Bitters couldn't take this anymore. "To the office NOW, Zim!"
Zim reluctantly left, head hanging, a scowl on his face. He went to the office for punishment.
Ms. Bitters sat back down. "Finish reading this chapter class, then you can go to lunch."
The whole class was gaping; mouths open, eyes wide, but soon went back to reading. Dib was amazed with what he saw, but quickly finished the chapter. When he got done he left along with other students.
He got his lunch and sat with his sister, like normal, but didn't eat. Instead he told Gaz what was going on, and what happened in class
"Sounds like he spazed out," she said bluntly.
"What should I do? Should I go and try to talk to him or laugh in his face?"
"I don't care," she eats her food and continued to play her GS2.
Of course she was no help to Dib, so he went with his gut. He looked around for the alien sitting by himself poking at his food. When he spotted him he smiled and walked over to the table.
"Hey Zim!" He said cheerfully
"What do you want Dib-monkey?" Zim asked.
"Just wanted to see what that whole thing this morning was all about," Dib answered truthfully.
"There was nothing going on this morning. I just came in late and I didn't make up an excuse. Now go away human worm-baby! I am trying to eat and be normal!" he exclaimed and eyed Dib suspiciously when he didn't leave. "What do you want with the mighty ZIM!?"
"Nothing. You just haven't been acting like yourself today. That's all."
Zim eyed him a little more, "Yeah right! You probably want to expose me, or take away my new robot bee like Tak did!"
Dib was puzzled by his comeback and let out a little laugh.
"What is so funny?! Zim demands to know!"
"Your just funny," Zim gave a startled look. So did Dib; he wasn't expecting to say anything nice to the alien. Then they both burst out into laughter at each other's faces.
When the laughter subsided Dib asked "So do you want to come over to my house after skool today, maybe?" Dib got a little embarrassed that he asked, but felt it might help the alien. He still didn't know why he cared.
Zim nearly laughed out loud, but caught himself, though, he didn't know why. "Ummm…. Why should I trust you?! You could be trying to expose me again!"
"I am not! I just thought we could hang out, you know?"
"Well…. Zim doesn't know about that. But…. I COULD get away from Gir for awhile…. I'll come over if I decide to trust you, but if I don't then oh well, OK?"
"Sure, whatever." Then the bell rang for class to start again.
After everyone was back in class they studied the universe and how it was all going to be doomed one day. And, strangely, Zim didn't ask any questions that relate to him being alien. No questions at all, really.
But through the whole day Zim kept giving Dib weird looks. He stared at him endlessly at times, trying to figure out why he asked him to come over. In the end he gave up trying to figure what was going on in that big head of Dib. Dib ignored him, making it look like he didn't notice.
When skool was over they both went out on the front of the skool above the stairs.
"So have you made up your mind about coming over to my house?" Dib asked coming up beside Zim.
"I have considered your offer and I accept. However if you betray me and try anything while I am there I will kill you. Got it?"
"Got it!"
"I have to go home before I come over. Gir gets worried if I am not home after skool. He thinks Pipi has come back to eat me or something stupid."
They both broke out into laughter again. "OK, well, come over when ever. Kay?"
"Alright. See you then," Zim said trotting off in the direction of his home.
"See you!" Dib called going in the direction of his bus.

He felt this way going to be a good day.
OK then. I hope you like It! I don't know if I am any good at writing. My friends and family and teachers say I'm gifted but i dunno. it took me like any hour to write this chapter :P
So I hope you like it and if you do give me feedback and comments of course. I wanna know if I am any good at writing or if I should quit now.
Also if you have saw my Smeet Zim Hug picture and you read my comment thingy then you know I said I wouldn't put any more Invader Zim pics up until i put up at least a chapter of this book I wanna write.... well this isn't the one. this is a smaller book to test and see how well it goes. And what I ment by not posting any more Invader Zim pics, that still stands but what I mean by it is that I wont post any of the Invader Zim pics that have one of my own character creations in it for it would be confusing. But I will post more, better, Invader Zim pics in the future of the real characters or some that relate to this story. so yaeh.

Enjoy!
Chapter 2: [link]
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:iconhetha4eva:
hetha4eva Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are a very good writer! keep it up!

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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will! :D
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EMO-NNY Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait is this zagr or zadr?
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:iconjustaanothertean:
Justaanothertean Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
Omg so funny cant wait to read the rest
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha thanks c:
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CatsAreMyFriends Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011
"try anything while I'm there and i will kill you. Got it?" LOL!!! this is great!
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Lol I just realized how perverted i made it sound ^^"
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DarbyLucy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this! :) It's just so odd to see Dib acting so nice to Zim.
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SlyDragon13 Featured By Owner May 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
LOVE IT LOVE IT ^-^
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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SlyDragon13 Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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MagicalTimeTravler Featured By Owner May 8, 2011
wow, i cant wait to read all the chapters! this one is pretty awesome!
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks friend (:
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:iconmagicaltimetravler:
MagicalTimeTravler Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
no prob ^^
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RippertheWerewolf Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
omg zim and dib friends...BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA thats a good one! LOL i love this story though! and they are right...you are gifted
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Kind words from a kind person :)
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RippertheWerewolf Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2011
yah...i am suprised i accually said somthing nice! LOL!
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
C:
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:iconrockchic31:
rockchic31 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
cool! ^^
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
^^ (:
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:iconrockchic31:
rockchic31 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
i think you should keep writing!!!
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I will :D
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:iconrockchic31:
rockchic31 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2011
awesome!!!
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:iconjacxx55:
jacxx55 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2011   Artist
if you make zim gay ill find u and kill got NOT IS THAR A ZAGR
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
... Hmm? O there is no ZADR in this its strictly ZADF but they are like bff's in it tho :D
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SCMwargie Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010  Student General Artist
LOVE IT
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! :D
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Greenspoonloverszim Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
:D I prefer zadr but this is so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *reads next chapter*
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. :D ZaDf gets less flames and just as much views. But thanks :DD
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Greenspoonloverszim Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2010
Lol your welcome!
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dapooted4giblets Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
yay! I like it.I must read the next chapter :)
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is nice. But I still don't get WHY Dib decided to go all hey letsa b friends with Zim...

Well whatever, just tell me THERE IS NOT ZADR HERE
ZADF ok ZADR no, plz
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
No ZADR, yus ZADF. You gotta understand that Dib is a loser so he should be friends with Dibbeh
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:iconallantsuki:
Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, Zim is a loser too.
In a different way.

I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THIS

But it's way funnier when they haet each other
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I know. Hateness will come back soon!
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:iconallantsuki:
Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WAIT WHAAAA?

I said it's funnier, not that I wanted it back!
BOO HOO
Plz don't give this story a sad ending
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It wont. It haz good ending!
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:iconallantsuki:
Allantsuki Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WILL HAET CONTINUE?
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The story will go on!
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kityboo Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
Zim was doing alien stuff xD
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
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:iconkityboo:
kityboo Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010
x33
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Hunter-Lover666 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm amazed!! I love Invader Zim.... You are just... Undescribable!! You've gotta write your own stuff and get it published.... AWESOME!! 0_o
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Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I've started some of my own books and never got around to get them finished... Thanks though. I am studying to be a doctor and when I have kids I'm gunna stop being a doctor and be a artist and author. I have big dreams. Thanks for your awesome comments!
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Hunter-Lover666 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well no problem... I was only saying the truth. If anyone else doesnt agree with me then... THEY'RE HATERS!! sorry... im a bit weird. x]
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
No problem! I'm weird too! I can come up with some crazy junk!
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Hunter-Lover666 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ooh... then i think we'll get along fine then. 0_o
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:iconemogirl88:
Emogirl88 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Yus, yus we will.
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Hunter-Lover666 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=3
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